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Friday, May 7, 2021

A Broken Song

Kia Ora everyone!

Today I am going to show you a writing piece that I wrote with my big sister, but It's mostly just me. It's about a 20-year-old girl called Valerie leaving home to find out more about the world and starts to have weird dreams when she's gone. Along her journey she discovers that she has a strong love for music, trying to go round the world to find more about her family secrets along the path. 

Sadly The writing is not finished but I will be working on it every day.  There's the link!

A Broken Song

Inspiration

Enola Holmes -  Enola is a very clever girl who lives with her Mother named Eudora but one day Enola wakes up and her Mother is not anywhere to be found. So she used her clever thinking to find her Mother well-finding friends and enemies 

Abominable - Yi a girl who had a father who would play the Violin to her all the time but Pasted away. People thought Yi stop playing the violin because of her father but secretly playing on the rooftop. She finds a yeti who escaped from a facility on the rooftop, Yi and her friends will help the yeti go Home. But some want's to capture the yeti.

( I recommend watching both of these movies because they are Great! )

what is your favorite song and why?

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Maiyde! Thanks for sharing this, I love your work! You have some very good ideas and are a stellar writer. Although, the tense changes often and there's a lot of grammar mistakes, make sure to double check what you write to see if it makes sense! Have a nice day.
    -Pandora

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