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Friday, March 19, 2021

Snow White and the broken heart

 Kia ora Everyone!

In literacy, my best friend Joy and I have been working on a story and it's called  " Snow White and the broken heart ". This story is about Snow White but with a twist, you have read it to know! Sadly the story

isn't finished yet, Joy and I will try to get it done! when we planed out the story it was gonna take a long time to make, also make sure you check out Joy's blog page!

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 19, 2021 at 9:55 AM

    Good job Maiyde I really liked the story and maybe you could add question so people can give you feedback.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 19, 2021 at 10:23 AM

    Hey Maiyde!
    I loved the story! I agree with Joy, next time add a question so you can get more comments! Though, without a question you are doing pretty well.
    I will comment on you soon!
    Bye, Mabel

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